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雅思作文高分锦囊:批判性思维的运用方式

30 Aug 2017 · 再来人

准备雅思考试的烤鸭们,是不是还在为提高分数头疼不已?是不是还在纠结雅思作文中单词和句式的运用?想要提高雅思作文分数,一定不能错过再来人留学小编给大家带来的这篇文章~

对于想要出国留学的童鞋,雅思考试是必须准备的语言考试之一。对于中国学生,雅思考试中最难提分的部分是雅思口语和雅思写作部分,今天再来人留学小编为大家分享一下如何运用批判性思维提高雅思作文分数。

首段的运用

Globally, I believe …….,although several individual cases should be considered .  
Universally, I hardly believe …..although several merits should be observed in some cases.
It is in part beneficial to a person or a group, but I still insist that ….
It is sometimes beneficial to a person or a group, but I assert….
例证:
1.现实还是理想更为重要?
Indeed , realism is necessary ,but I believe idealism is much more vital in most cases .
2.什么是大学校长或领导人应该具备的更重要的素质,学术能力还是个人素质?
It is in part crucial to qualification of leaders , but fund-raising and management skills are more crucial .
3.外来音乐还是传统音乐更加重要?
Generally speaking, international music brings us a great number of things as ideology and culture ,but traditional one still plays an irreplaceable and dominant role in our society .
4.单独旅游还是同伴旅行更好?
When it comes to travel ways , doing alone sounds fairly good ,but it is more interesting to do with friends .
5.电视的优点多还是缺点多?
Speaking of TV set, its advantages outnumber disadvantages, although which are being more or less.

在主体段对比句型的展示

1.These misconceptions do not remain isolated but become incorporated into a multifaceted, but organized , conceptual framework ,making it and the component ideas, some of which are erroneous ,more robust but also accessible to modification.(对比)
2.Despite the extensive coverage in the popular media of the destruction of rainforests , little formal information is available about children’s ideas in this area. (对比)
3.Although small-scale business training an credit programs have become more common throughout the world ,relatively little attention has been paid to the need to direct such opportunities to young people. Even less has been paid to children living on the street or in difficult circumstances.
4.As more and more subjects can be taught via the computer , there would seem to be less and less need for teachers to be present ,as self-study and autonomous learning are encouraged with the assistance of a computer .

批判性思维在主体段思维的展示

(抽象类话题): Scientific progress influences our daily life greatly. Do you
think this is a positive or negative development?
首段的批判性思维: It is undeniable that technological advancement has made an
unprecedented change in our daily life in the last century. Its destructive impaction
our society, nonetheless, has also to be recognized.
主体段批判性思维: However, artistic structures can be seen in many places around the world. Human has the nature to pursue beauty and express their feelings through art works and architecture definitely is one of them by which this goal can be achieved. Over emphasis on architectural function tends to global similarity as international tourists have witnessed. In contrast, a building with certain aesthetic value is always unique and therefore adorned by local people or even foreigners and cherished as a cultural treasure, such as the Bird’s Nest and the Water Cube in Beijing which have been not only an ordinary Olympic stadium or a swimming pool but also a hot tourist spot due to their unique splendid exterior. However, the external appearance should not be the most important consideration as a good looking but less useful building is just a waste of substantial resources such as wood, steel, cement, energy sources and labor force, all of which have to be invested in construction.
(例)工厂是否应该搬迁到城市边缘去?
However, more employees have become the beneficiaries of this trend.many employees used to complain about crowed office space,acute shortage of parking lots,expensive luncheon and tedious civic landscape filled up with cement blocks. now, they can move to a larger spaces,like industrial parks equipped with more personalized facilities ,including regular shuttle bus service, areas for relaxation and comfortable and large meeting rooms with nicer views.all these seems to be a "utopia" to those who are still working in congested blocks.

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